Semi-Automated "Proof Of Concept" Movie Production Of Novels Is In The Offing

In going from a novel to a big budget movie or series, a critical step is a “Proof Of Concept” motion picture where potential investors are exposed to the market potential of the movie or series. The cost of reaching this POC stage is out of the reach of most “fandom” cultures as it involves translating the book into a screen play, which can be laborious, and then translating the screen play into actual motion pictures however low-budget.

However, the semiautomated translation from novel to screenplay is now plausible, as well as the semiautomated translation from screenplay to POC. Here’s an example of translating the opening scene from my favorite novel “Camp 38” to a screen play – which could then be fed to a semiautomated low budget text to video production POC:

Me to ChatGPT: Change the following book passage into the corresponding scene in a screenplay based on the book:

STATEMENT OF THE KNOWN FACTS

In San Francisco, last April, a man in his early twenties was hit by a city bus on Van Ness Avenue and died before reaching the hospital. There were many witnesses and the investigation was routine; the death was officially recorded as accidental. The victim aroused some interest because the lack of identification was so complete it looked purposeful. He had a new billfold with over eight hundred dollars but no identifying cards, no cleaning or laundry marks on his clothes, and there was no record of his fingerprints. I am a reporter for the San Francisco Post-Intelligencer. When the accident occurred I chanced to be driving behind the bus. A patrol car was also in the block; the police and I reach the accident at the same time and, while we were crawling under the bus to get to the already unconscious man, I found a red book on the street about four feet from the victim. Thinking it might be an angle on the story, I started to put it in my purse until I had time to look at it. One of the officers saw what I was doing and insisted on taking it from me. I let him have it at the time but, as the connection with the deceased had not been established, I later filed a claim to it as its finder. On the book were no traces of the victim’s fingerprints, but they could easily have been destroyed by mine or those of the police officer, and I am frankly of the opinion that the book was on the young man’s person at the time of the accident. However, because there was no conclusive evidence to that effect, a quirk of law makes it mine. It is now in my possession. It is a red cloth bound diary, six by nine inches in size, with full pages for each day of the year. The front pages up to January twenty-one had been torn out and the book then reused without regard to printed dates. The context of the diary makes it clear that if dates had been used they would not have been those of our calendar. At the time I found the book a folded letter in an unsealed, unaddressed envelope was closed within its pages. A photograph of the letter showing the handwriting, and a photograph of the diary were part of my story on the accident which appeared on page one of my paper. For reasons that are obvious from their contents, both the letter and the diary appear intended for personal delivery by the accident victim as a precaution against their falling into the wrong hands. An additional reason — that of introducing the young man to the girl to whom the letter was addressed — appears a high probability. Both letter and diary are reprinted here in full without editing. Only one thing has been added. The separate, undated entries in the diary have been numbered consecutively like chapters in a book.

ChatGPT:
FADE IN:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - DAY

A young man in his early twenties walks down the sidewalk, lost in thought. He crosses the street and as he steps off the curb, a city bus hits him. The man falls to the ground, unconscious.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - DAY

A police patrol car and a reporter’s car pull up to the scene of the accident at the same time. The reporter, JANE, gets out of her car and starts to approach the victim.

JANE
(to police officer)
I’m a reporter with the San Francisco Post-Intelligencer. Can you tell me what happened?

POLICE OFFICER
(to Jane)
He was hit by a bus. We don’t know who he is.

JANE
(looking at the victim)
There’s no identification on him?

POLICE OFFICER
(shaking his head)
No, nothing.

JANE
(spotting the red book on the ground)
Wait, what’s that?

Jane bends down and picks up the book. The police officer approaches her.

POLICE OFFICER
What are you doing?

JANE
I thought it might be a lead for my story.

POLICE OFFICER
(looking at the book)
Let me see that.

Jane hands the book over to the police officer. He looks at it and then hands it back to her.

POLICE OFFICER
It doesn’t have any identifying information. You can keep it if you want.

JANE
Thank you.

The police officer and Jane crawl under the bus to get to the victim.

CUT TO:

INT. JANE’S OFFICE - DAY

Jane sits at her desk, typing up her story on the accident. She types out the known facts of the accident and the lack of identification on the victim. She then types about finding the red book and the folded letter inside it.

CUT TO:

EXT. JANE’S OFFICE BUILDING - DAY

Jane leaves the building, holding the red book and folded letter. She gets into her car and drives away.

CUT TO:

INT. JANE’S APARTMENT - DAY

Jane sits on her couch, examining the red book and letter. She opens the book and sees that the front pages have been torn out.

JANE
(to herself)
Strange.

She then opens the folded letter and reads it. As she reads, the camera zooms in on the letter and we hear the voiceover of the letter being read.

LETTER VOICEOVER
My dearest Rose, I cannot wait to see you again. I have something to show you, something that will change everything.

Jane finishes reading the letter and looks at the red book.

JANE
(to herself)
I have a feeling this book is connected to the victim.

She flips through the pages of the diary, seeing that the entries are numbered like chapters in a book. She then picks up her phone and starts to make a call.

FADE OUT.

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Wow! This is just amazing.

I always heard that screenwriting was a talent distinctly different from writing novels or short stories. Sounds like those who earn their living doing that can join the others watching the water rise.

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It is, if my background as someone who attended the Undergraduate Iowa City Writer’s Workshop while Anthony Burgess was the artist in residence is enough authority to so affirm.

What just struck me, but is obvious in retrospect, is that not every author has direct input on a screenplay, let alone has a director like Stanley Kubrick to work with on the screen play. Cutting out the middleman between author and at least POC if not final cut, could have a major impact.

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This is impressive new tech insofar as the technical - dare we say “intellectual” - component of movie making is concerned. I am old enough to remember the improbably-named FCC chairman Newton Minnow’s remark that “television (and many would argue, cinema) is a vast wasteland”. So, I wonder if there is any chance this tech will improve the final product.

In that regard, I here announce inauguration of Westman’s index. It is a ratio (in hours) of the time spent searching streaming platform content menus to time spent actually watching content. In our household, it approaches unity and, subjectively, the feeling tone during this task is like dragging one’s nails across a blackboard (OK, we’re dating ourselves). The same feeling, sorry to say, often continues through the content as well. Will this marvelous new technology help? Can it make the ever-intruding commercials (even on paid programming) “look like America”?

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Yes. Sometimes while working up a sweat on the elliptical I’ll play something but its gotten to the point that I’ll just listen to an Audible book rather than waste time searching for video. I really want to avoid punishment for exercise and that’s what happens more often than not if I “settle” for something to “watch”. Literally bad for my health.

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The quality versus quantity issue we all struggle with. Perhaps I am being too cynical, but it seems rather improbable that semi-automated “Proof of Concept” productions will correct the problem of a general paucity of good stories.

There was a time I was really impressed with Japanese anime. The best of it is very, very good, such as “Full Metal Alchemist” – and probably allows for much richer story-telling than is possible with live action movies. But I soon learned that the supply of the best is rather limited, and the average anime is like the average live action drama – average.

I moved on to Korean movies and TV shows, where again the best is very good indeed, such as “City Hunter”. But one quickly learns that the average Korean TV show involves a poor but smart & hard working young woman and her rocky romance with a rich but dissolute young man. Though in praise of the Korean industry, their movies also tend to highlight government corruption – and happy endings are not required.

Now my focus is on Chinese movies & TV shows, but once more there is the realization that the cream is a rather narrow layer. Today, the global industry has wonderful movie-making techniques, but the industry does not seem to recognize that great visuals cannot compensate for lackluster story lines, and thus fails to invest in good writers. Hence the standard movie world joke – the blonde aspiring actress was so dumb she slept with the writer.

As an alternative, there is much to be said for the “Great Courses” series. Might as well use the time plugging some of the gaps in my education instead of searching for any globules of escaped cream.

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Back at the legacy site, I reviewed some really excellent Russian TV series. Some are still available on Amazon. Really beautiful productions, e.g. Ekaterina, Godunov, Rasputin, Peter the Great. Very worthwhile productions - subtitled in English.

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Here’s a movie highly critical of the Communist Party that became a cult film in Russia:

Maybe we need to revisit this micro-genre of absurd dystopian sci-fi for criticizing the dysfunction of the world.

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https://twitter.com/ChristianF369/status/1651607149804498946
Semi automated movie preview clip generation.

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Over a year later, is GPT4 any better at cranking out a screenplay? Google’s Gemini tried to punt with voice over narration rather than portraying the events being narrated by the reporter. I coaxed into doing something more reasonable but shouldn’t have had to.

Here is the identical prompt’s response from the present GPT4:

INT. NEWS CAR - VAN NESS AVENUE, SAN FRANCISCO - DAY

A reporter, 30s, drives a news car, trailing a city bus. Sirens sound in the background as a PATROL CAR is also visible.

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE, SAN FRANCISCO - CONTINUOUS

The bus abruptly stops. A MAN, early 20s, lies on the ground, critically injured. Witnesses gather. The reporter and police officers rush to the scene.

REPORTER
(urgently to Police Officer)
We need to help him!

They crawl under the bus towards the unconscious man. The reporter spots a red book on the street.

REPORTER
(picking up the book, muttering)
This could be something…

A POLICE OFFICER notices, approaches.

POLICE OFFICER
(firmly)
I need to take that.

REPORTER
(reluctantly handing it over)
Alright, but I found it. It might be important.

The officer takes the book as the EMTs arrive and start to attend to the man.

INT. REPORTER’S OFFICE - SAN FRANCISCO POST-INTELLIGENCER - DAY

The reporter sits at a cluttered desk, the red book now in front of her. She opens it, revealing a folded letter in an envelope.

REPORTER
(voice-over)
The book had no traces of the victim’s prints… possibly wiped by mine or the officer’s. A quirky law makes it mine now.

She flips through the diary, showing entries that ignore the pre-printed dates.

REPORTER
(voice-over)
No dates used, and the context… not from our calendar. This diary and the letter were meant for personal delivery. Clearly, they were meant to be kept secret.

She holds up the diary and the letter for a photograph, which is then seen in the front-page story of the newspaper.

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X’s Grok did better than Google’s Gemini:

Answer

FADE IN:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE, SAN FRANCISCO - DAYA bustling city street, filled with pedestrians and vehicles. A city bus speeds along the road.CUT TO:INT. BUS - DAYA MAN (early 2s) sits near the back, clutching a RED CLOTH BOUND DIARY. He looks around nervously.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - CONTINUOUS

The bus turns a corner sharply. The man is thrown forward, his diary flying out of his hands.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - CONTINUOUS

The bus hits the man. He falls to the ground, unconscious.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - CONTINUOUS

A PATROL CAR pulls up next to the bus. Two POLICE OFFICERS jump out and rush towards the scene.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - CONTINUOUS

A REPORTER (mid-20s, female) driving behind the bus, stops her car and rushes towards the accident.

REPORTER(to herself) This could be my big break.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - CONTINUOUS

The reporter and the police officers crawl under the bus to reach the unconscious man.

REPORTER (spotting the diary) What’s this?

She picks up the diary and starts to put it in her purse.

POLICE OFFICER 1 (noticing) Hey, what do you think you’re doing?

REPORTER It’s for my story.

POLICE OFFICER 1 (taking the diary) I’ll take that.

CUT TO:

INT. POLICE STATION - DAY

The reporter is filing a claim to the diary.

REPORTER I found it fair and square.

CUT TO:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - DAY

The reporter stands next to her car, holding the diary.

REPORTER (to herself) Time to see what’s inside.

FADE OUT.

Note: The screenplay format includes scene headings, action descriptions, and dialogue. The passage has been adapted to show the key events and the reporter’s involvement, while also setting the scene for further exploration of the diary’s contents.

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GPT4o is the “improved” GPT4. But it resorted to more voice overs than I would consider appropriate, although not as bad as Google’s Gemini:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE, SAN FRANCISCO - DAY

April. A city bus zooms down Van Ness Avenue. Crowds bustle along the sidewalks. Suddenly, chaos ensues.

WIDE SHOT:

A man in his early twenties, JAMES, steps into the street and is struck by the bus. The bus screeches to a halt. People scream and gather around the scene.

CUT TO: PATROL CAR

Two POLICE OFFICERS inside notice the commotion and quickly exit their vehicle.

CUT TO:

Our protagonist, a REPORTER (late 30s, female), is driving just behind the bus. She pulls over hastily and rushes to the scene, grabbing her notepad and pen.

ANGLE ON: UNDER THE BUS

The police officers and the reporter crouch down and crawl under the bus to reach James, who is barely conscious. The reporter spots a red book on the street, about four feet from James.

REPORTER (V.O.) In San Francisco, last April, a man in his early twenties was hit by a city bus on Van Ness Avenue and died before reaching the hospital.

The reporter grabs the red book and discreetly slips it into her purse.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) I am a reporter for the San Francisco Post-Intelligencer. When the accident occurred, I chanced to be driving behind the bus. A patrol car was also in the block; the police and I reached the accident at the same time.

One of the officers notices her action and insists on taking the book from her.

POLICE OFFICER #1 Ma’am, I need to take that.

The reporter hesitates but hands it over reluctantly.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) I let him have it at the time, but later filed a claim to it as its finder. The book was in my possession soon after.

CUT TO: POLICE STATION

The officer hands the book to a DETECTIVE. The detective inspects it, finding no fingerprints.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) On the book were no traces of the victim’s fingerprints, but they could easily have been destroyed by mine or those of the police officer.

CUT TO: REPORTER’S DESK - NEWSROOM

The reporter sits at her cluttered desk, the red book now in her possession again. She opens it to reveal a folded letter in an unsealed, unaddressed envelope inside.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) It is a red cloth-bound diary, six by nine inches in size, with full pages for each day of the year. The front pages up to January twenty-one had been torn out and the book then reused without regard to printed dates.

She begins typing up her story, the letter and the diary beside her.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) A photograph of the letter showing the handwriting, and a photograph of the diary were part of my story on the accident which appeared on page one of my paper.

Her article is prominently displayed on the front page of the newspaper.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) For reasons that are obvious from their contents, both the letter and the diary appear intended for personal delivery by the accident victim as a precaution against their falling into the wrong hands.

She looks at the photograph of the young man from the letter, a girl’s face in the background.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) An additional reason — that of introducing the young man to the girl to whom the letter was addressed — appears a high probability. Both letter and diary are reprinted here in full without editing.

CLOSE UP: DIARY ENTRIES

The separate, undated entries in the diary have been numbered consecutively.

REPORTER (V.O.) (CONT’D) Only one thing has been added. The separate, undated entries in the diary have been numbered consecutively like chapters in a book.

The camera zooms in on the diary entries, revealing a story that is about to unfold.

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Meta’s latest version of LLama:

Here is the corresponding scene in a screenplay based on the book:

FADE IN:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE - DAY

A city bus speeds down the street, hits a young man in his early twenties, and sends him flying. The bus screeches to a halt. Witnesses scream.

CUT TO:

REPORTER (JESSICA), driving behind the bus, jumps out of her car and rushes to the scene.

JESSICA
(into phone)
Get an ambulance here, now!

POLICE OFFICER
(rushing to the scene)
Everyone, stay back!

Jessica and the officer crawl under the bus to reach the victim.

JESSICA
(seeing the red book)
What’s that?

POLICE OFFICER
(taking the book)
I’ll handle that.

JESSICA
(protesting)
Hey, I saw it first!

POLICE OFFICER
(firmly)
I need to take this as evidence.

CUT TO:

INT. POLICE STATION - LATER

Jessica files a claim for the red book.

JESSICA
(to officer)
I’m claiming the red book as its finder.

POLICE OFFICER
(skeptical)
You know we can’t just give it to you.

JESSICA
(persistent)
I’ll take my chances.

CUT TO:

INT. JESSICA’S APARTMENT - LATER

Jessica examines the red book, a diary with torn-out front pages. She finds a folded letter in an unsealed envelope.

JESSICA
(intrigued)
What secrets do you hold?

FADE OUT.

Please note that this is just one possible interpretation of the scene, and there are many ways to adapt the book passage into a screenplay.

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Claude 3.5 refused:

I apologize, but I cannot reproduce or closely paraphrase copyrighted material without permission, even if modified into a different format like a screenplay. Doing so could potentially infringe on the author’s copyright.

Instead, I can offer some general guidance on adapting prose to screenplay format:

Focus on visual elements and action that can be shown on screen.
Convert narrative descriptions into scene headings, action lines, and dialogue.
Use present tense and active voice.
Only include what the audience can see or hear.
Break up long paragraphs of prose into shorter, more focused screenplay elements.
If you’d like to discuss screenplay writing techniques in general, or if you have any other questions about adapting books to film that don’t require reproducing copyrighted content, I’d be happy to help with that. Let me know if you’d like to explore any of those topics further.

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I asked GPT4 to criticize its own screenplay rendition and based on that criticism provide a prompt that would elicit a better screenplay. Here’s its suggested prompt and the resulting screenplay:

Please adapt the following book passage into a detailed screenplay scene. Focus on vividly depicting the setting of San Francisco’s Van Ness Avenue during a bustling day, showing the chaotic aftermath of a tragic bus accident. Develop the character of the reporter, making her more relatable and giving subtle hints of her personal stakes in the story. Ensure the dialogue reflects the urgency and realism of the situation, using natural speech patterns. Smoothly transition between the accident and the reporter’s office, showing her investigative process rather than using voice-over. Lastly, emphasize the emotional impact of the scene, focusing on the tragedy and the mysterious elements of the unidentified victim and the red diary found near him.

Title: Unclaimed Pages

FADE IN:

EXT. VAN NESS AVENUE, SAN FRANCISCO - DAY

A bustling urban scene. Cars and buses honk and weave through crowded streets. Pedestrians hustle across crosswalks. Amidst the chaos, a CITY BUS makes a sudden stop, its tires screeching. An audible thump silences the surrounding noise momentarily.

CUT TO:

A young MAN, 20s, lies prone on the pavement. Bystanders gather, some dialing phones, others shouting for help.

INT. NEWS CAR - CONTINUOUS

A woman, CLAIRE, 30s, reporter for the San Francisco Post-Intelligencer, sits in traffic, observing the accident scene. Her expression is a mix of concern and professional curiosity. She grabs her notepad and camera, exits her car.

EXT. ACCIDENT SCENE - CONTINUOUS

Claire approaches cautiously, camera in hand. A POLICE CAR arrives almost simultaneously. OFFICERS rush out to secure the scene. Claire slips through the gathering crowd, snapping photos.

CLAIRE (to a Police Officer) What happened?

POLICE OFFICER Bus hit him. We need to clear the area now.

Claire nods, moving closer to the scene. She notices a RED BOOK on the ground near the victim.

CLAIRE (under her breath) What’s this?

She reaches for the book just as an OFFICER sees her.

OFFICER Hey! Leave everything as it is.

CLAIRE Just thought it might be important.

She hands it to the officer reluctantly but makes a mental note of the book.

CUT TO:

INT. SAN FRANCISCO POST-INTELLIGENCER - CLAIRE’S OFFICE - DAY

Claire sits at her desk surrounded by papers and a cluttered bulletin board. The red book is now prominently placed on her desk. She opens it, revealing a FOLDED LETTER.

CLAIRE (to herself) No ID, no fingerprints… and this?

She reads the letter, her brows furrowing with intrigue.

CLAIRE (to herself) Intended for personal delivery? Who was he trying to reach?

She starts typing vigorously on her computer, piecing together her story.

INSERT: The computer screen showing her article draft titled “Unclaimed Identity: Mystery Surrounds Van Ness Tragedy.”

CLAIRE (continuing, softly) What were you trying to tell us?

FLASHBACK TO:

EXT. ACCIDENT SCENE - DAY (FLASHBACK)

Claire, earlier, watching paramedics cover the victim with a white sheet. She looks back at the red book being bagged as evidence.

BACK TO:

CLAIRE’S OFFICE

Claire looks determined. She starts making calls, her eyes fixed on the red book.

CLAIRE (into phone) I need a follow-up on that bus accident… Yes, the victim had a book. I need to see if there’s more to it.

FADE OUT.

END SCENE

This screenplay focuses on visual detail, character development, and seamless transitions, with dialogue that reflects the urgency of the situation and underscores the emotional depth and mystery surrounding the unidentified victim and the red diary.

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